Well last time is said I was stuck, but now I'm almost done with chapter 2...this fight is sooo epic that I had to split it into two chapters. Doing that is, of course, going to make Yellow Generation even longer. HURRAY! I wasn't expecting it to be that long but hey I need to get my point across. It's so fast paced that there is even a transformation in it, in most action comic that isn't done within the first 20 something odd pages, and I believe it works. For my first fight scene I think I achieved what I was aiming for since after this Yellow Gen calms down a bit for character development and some build up for the mega huge final fight, I hope I can handle that.